Nice shot! I would work on selective contrast control; burn the corners down but also lower the contrast because burning an area will increase contrast as well. Needs a little more contrast in the face. Try and get the face to be just a touch lighter than any area in the background (the viewers eyes are attracted to light areas and this will draw them to her face.)
As far as the camera work, choice of lense is good however I think it would have been nice to have a slightly (not much) higher c
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